...Hmm?
Overall a good take (for a demo).
Contrary to previous reviews, I thought the overall flow worked very well with the song - and due to the lack of a lead or percussion, I could very easily see that as an interlude track to another song on a CD (think "Parabol" into "Parabola" from TOOL)...
Nothing greatly exciting, but givin the overall vibe of the song, I think that's what you were going for. I'd actually like to see this song revisited some day... if nothing else, maybe with just some higher quality, as, well, no offense, but at times the vocals get a little indistinguishable and/or off-key.
8/10, 5/5